The Tree On The Hill
21/02/2014 10 Comments
The tree on the hill,
It’s waiting there still,
Where we kissed
‘neath the moon
In the spring.
The tree on the hill,
With the leaves looking ill,
Still remains
Like the pain
Felt within.
The tree on the hill,
Dark shadows fulfilled,
Will forever
Be painted
As sin.
The tree on the hill,
That tortures me still,
Digs deep
Beneath soul
And the skin.
The tree on the hill,
With enough strength and will,
Could be cut
And the healing
Begin.
But…
The tree on the hill,
Where it stands strong and still,
Will endure
Like the pain
Felt within.
Love the imagery in this. A powerful depiction though so sad.
I can always rely on you to comment, thank you xx
I’ll take that as a compliment. π You know me….just have to say it when I feel it. π
Does sound like it would be healthier to cut that tree down. but then maybe..
The tree on the hill
Will bend to your will
And you’ll find
You can learn from that ‘sin’
hope you don’t mind, it just occurred to me and so i felt i should share it with you.
That’s a lovely verse, thank you
i’m glad you didnt mind π i’m enjoying reading through your older posts
Simon, lovely, truly lovely. I love the melodic flow…
Thank you John, you know how much your comments mean π
Love this so much! Must share if you don’t mind xxx
I’m glad you like it. Share away π hope you got my email.