Your Mask

Draw back
your mask of affected
show to me
your true self,
hurt, raw
and bitter
from life’s
constant struggle.
Let me gaze
upon that which
the world
has given up on;
for despite your
doubt and lack
of faith,
to me you are


10 Responses to Your Mask

  1. girlgoo says:

    Almost makes me feel beautiful….I love it.

  2. 1jaded1 says:

    Your words are always beautiful.

  3. fibee5 says:

    There is nothing more wonderful than someone seeing who you truly are and loving you. what a lovely poem 🙂

    • Simon says:

      Thank you again, that was kind of the message I was attempting to get across here. I’m glad you got it 🙂

      • fibee5 says:

        It seemed an obvious one to me but then i guess we can all read different things in poems 🙂 will be reading Not for me a bit later, don’t want to read to much at once 🙂

      • Simon says:

        I have another one already written – I have to stop myself posting too much at once!

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